Proof reading, one paragraph checking grammar and punctuation? please best answer and 10 points straight away?

As a group carrying out this task on an early year setting, it was noticed there is a wide demand on childcare provision; this is both in private and non private sector. These provisions are very demandable and are in immense need to the society. All child care provisions require an early year educator to run these settings in order to work effectively with children and parents in accordance to the policy and procedure guidelines. These provision require qualifications, experience etc.